Alliteration was lazy
and already from the start
didn’t want to pull
the poetry train
Assonance and consonance
and even perfect rhyme,
they all refused and complained
So then we decided
to step off the poetry train
And just roll in rhythm together
in the wordless, vibrant fields
of this hot sunny Sunday
©RoseGirl2019
Excellent! 😊
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Thank you!! 🙂
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My pleasure.
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Love the personification… roll on!!
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Thank you very much!
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You’re kindly welcome.
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I love the playful start here and then the romantic with a little passion to finish. Great little piece 🙂 🙂
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Ah thank you!!
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