Rain ticks on the rooftop
water like music
brings me back
to this instant
where I’ve always been
with you
©RoseGirl2026
Poetic Art From The Heart ~ Finding Beauty In Truth
Poetic Art From The Heart ~ Finding Beauty In Truth
Rain ticks on the rooftop
water like music
brings me back
to this instant
where I’ve always been
with you
©RoseGirl2026
Beautiful! A question to the poet in you: how to get to that moment? That moment of perfection where you find again the one you write about? You can perhaps answer in your next poems, if you feel like. In French it’s called “Le déclic”, the breakthrough, the turning point. It’s like when you try to untie a knot, you may struggle with it for long, but then, all of a sudden…
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Thank you, Erik. That’s an interesting question… I will think/ write about it. To me it is often almost a moment of mercy.
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I like this poem! Thank you very much!
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Thank you for your support, Alexander, I appreciate it.
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A nice piece. Did you take a break from writing?
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Thank you, David, nice to hear from you. I have some things going on in my life (also physically), therefore, I do not always have the space to write.
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Take care of yourself. We too have had a busy time, moving to Lincolnshire, and I have had a hip replacement but we are doing well.
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